From e926ea16e276b6ca7650711165b4084679d1137f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Jerger <michael.jerger@meissa-gmbh.de>
Date: Thu, 18 Jan 2024 20:06:56 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] improve english ..

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 docs/unsure-where-to-put/adr-map-federated-person.md | 6 ++----
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/unsure-where-to-put/adr-map-federated-person.md b/docs/unsure-where-to-put/adr-map-federated-person.md
index 2056269f1e..c124c10183 100644
--- a/docs/unsure-where-to-put/adr-map-federated-person.md
+++ b/docs/unsure-where-to-put/adr-map-federated-person.md
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ classDiagram
 
 We can use forgejo code (like star / unstar fkt.) without changes.
 
-Introduce FederatedUser as new & persistence, no need for refactorings.
+Introduce FederatedUser as new model & persistence.
 
 But we use fields (User.EMail, User.Password) against their semantic, but we probably can handle the problems arising.
 
@@ -299,12 +299,10 @@ classDiagram
 
 ### 4. Map to new FederatedPerson and introduce a common User interface
 
-Cached FederatedPerson is mainly independent to existing User. At every place of interaction we have to enhance persistence & introduce a common User interface.
-
 1. We map PersonId.asWbfinger() to FederatedPerson.ExternalID (e.g. 13@some.instan.ce).
 2. We will have no semantic mismatch.
 
-We can use forgejo code (like star / unstar fkt.) after refactorings only.
+We can use forgejo code (like star / unstar fkt.) after refactorings only. At every place of interaction we have to enhance persistence (e.g. a find may have to query two tables now) & introduce a common User interface.
 
 We introduce new model & persistence.